On receipt of my feedback for assignment 1, I have updated my blog to ensure all images can now be viewed individually. I have removed a couple of images from my ‘Square Mile’ and agree that they didn’t quite balance within the set. I will think more about what my images represent and how I want my audience to respond in my reflective text and I will demonstrate further my research and reading.
On receipt of my feedback for assignment 2, I have updated my blog so that the exercises are altogether in the header menu. I will add more critical analysis to my written work.
On receipt of my feedback for assignment 3, I have replaced a couple of my images, changed them back to colour and added some critical analysis.
On receipt of my feedback for assignment 4, I have added my studio shots along side my final images, I have changed the link on my blog for the reading and research so they are drop down menus. I will apply further in depth analysis going forward.
On receipt of my feedback for assignment 5, I have made the photographers clearer in my reading and research menu, by underlining them and making the font bold. I have expanded and included a little more personal analysis and honest evaluation in my reflective notes.
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